Thursday 11 March 2010

Feedback of rough cut from class - Ryan

Good feedback:
  • good ident
  • shooting scene
  • king knocked over
  • opening credits
  • fitting opening music
  • smooth transitions
  • effective shaky camera
Improvement feedback:
  • Chess didn't make sense
  • soundtrack starts well then goes down hill
  • Helicopter irrelevant
  • why did josh stop running

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